septiembre 12, 2010

Luces ...

Esta noche salí

a hacerle el amor

a las luces de la ciudad ...
.
.
.



me acomode detrás del volante

aceleré a fondo

y trate de no pensarte,

las luces me distrajeron,

cuando llegue a casa

me tire sobre la cama

y cerré los ojos ...
.
.

22 comentarios:

Mai Puvin dijo...

Es hermoso... se parece a mi noche, salvo el final porque cuando cerré los ojos... lloré.

Un abrazo.

Soy beatriz dijo...

Hola Lau, hermoso poema, con ese poder de síntesis que admiro tanto!!!
Tantas veces hemos cerrado los ojos, y en tan diversos sentidos.

Un abrazo grande!!! Y gracias siempre por estar!!

Conversaciones de todo dijo...

En Paris siempre carros que nunbra Luces de meblinas.

TORO SALVAJE dijo...

Creo que esa persona va contigo siempre.
Vayas donde vayas.

Besos.

NV BALLESTEROS dijo...

Cuando cierro los ojos veo sus ojos negros, no hay lugar donde esconderse...

Besos

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